自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没。或者有什么更好的表达方式。谢谢了~~

There are all sorts of lifestyle to choice for different people. I love serene life,but sometimes I always feel lonely. When I had the feeling I used to call myfriends going shopping or drinking tea.

改语法错误:
There are all sorts of lifestyels for different people to choose. I love serene life but sometimes I feel lonely. When I have the feeling, I call my friends to go shopping or have tea (或者 When I had the feeling, I would call my friend to go shopping or have tea).

私以为更好一些的表达方式:
There exist numerous ways to live our lives. I prefer life of serenity. When lonliness strikes, which happens occasionaly, I choose to enjoy shopping or tea with my friends.
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第1个回答  2013-07-17
There are all sorts of lifestyle for different people to choose . I love serene life,but I always feel lonely. When I had the feeling, I used to call myfriends to go shopping or drink tea.
第2个回答  2013-07-17
There are all sorts of lifestyle to choose for different people. I love serene life,but sometimes I always feel lonely. When I have the feeling I used to go shopping or have tea with my .
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