I like running,which is an effective way to improve my body health，and it can make me develop a good habit of persistence.
没有语法错误。
但从语句上来说：
可删去body，health即可；
make改成help，make表示“让”，语气僵硬；
habit是习惯的意思，A habit is something that you do often or regularly. 是经常做的事。建议换成性格personality或者character。
满意请采纳，谢谢。
追问我最后那句话想表达的意思就是通过跑步，可以帮我养成坚持不懈的好习惯。把habit替换成那两个词可以吗
追答如果你是小学、初中、高中，那可以。但实际上你要明白，英语中的habit和中文中的“习惯”二字不能划等号。单从这句话来说，personality和character更加贴切。
追问已采纳
那这句话语法有没有什么问题
Besides,I also learned the knowledge about cultural heritate and museum by myself.But I realized that what I had learned was not enough.I'm eager to further my study and raise my professional level.
此外，我自己还学习了有关文物与博物馆的知识。但是我意识到我所学的还远远不够。我渴望进一步学习并提示我的专业水平。
求指教
追答修改建议：删去the knowledge；heritate→heritage；museum→museums（或改成museology）；realized→realize；had→have；was→is。
修改后的句子是：Besides, I also learned about cultural heritage and museology by myself. But I realize that what I have learned is not enough. I'm eager to further my study and raise my professional level.
这样比较简洁、通顺，时态也比较合理。