自己写了一个英语句子，请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没。或者有什么更好的表达方式。谢谢了~~

Question

many years ago, I had refused a boy who courted me so many times . nowadays we always go to bar to play with eachother , I fell I am falling in love with him. But he told me he has girlfriend now.

Answer 1

Many years ago, I refused a boy who had been courting me for quite a while. Recently we always hang out together. I feel I'm in love with him, but he told me he had a girlfriend
多年前，我拒绝了一个追求我很久的男孩（拒绝是个短暂性动作，不需要用过去完成时。而追求很久可以用连贯性动作had been courting）
现在我们经常一块出去玩（nowadays太过于书面，可改为recently.而hang out就包含了去酒吧）
我感觉我爱上他了，但他说他已经名草有主。后面的跟你的差不多，稍微简洁了一点追问

你把我的最后一句has还成了had..我觉得应该用has吧。。不是引用某人说的话应该是原型吗？

追答

he told me "I have a girlfriend" 这个是引用，打上冒号。他告诉我“我有女友了”
he told me he had a girlfriend 这个是陈述，从句时态跟随主句时态。

Answer 2

无它,为robbiechn的答案改一点点,个人认为会更好.请选择robbiechn.

Many years ago, I refused a boy who had been courting me for quite a long time. Recently we often hang out together. I feel I'm in love with him, but he told me he had a girlfriend.
只是手贱,想把always 改为often.请robbiechn勿怪.

Answer 3

Many years ago, I rejected a boy who had courted me many times. Recently, we have been hanging out with each other. I feel that I'm in love with him, but he told me before that he had a girlfriend.