大家帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误？

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

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推荐答案 2010-06-17

是孩子写的吧？总体来说挺不错，但是在初学阶段，最好避免用and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.这种从句，要把句子分开，说明白，可以说In the afternoon, my father asked me to help him water the plant. I finished the work and felt very happy, the flowers are smiling in the wind beautifully.

另外，最后一句应该用was而不是is。还有，unforgetive不好，可以换成外国人更加常用的amazing
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第1个回答 2010-06-17

help him water the plant 在water前加to

第2个回答 2010-06-17

首先注意大小写吧！

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