谁能帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误。O(∩_∩)O谢谢！最好翻译一下。

Question

It's going to be sunny on next Monday, has a highest temperature of 9 degree and a lowest of 5 degree . And it continues to be pretty good on Tuesday, has a highest temperature of 12 degree and possiblly a lowest temperature of 6 degree. But Wendsday is going to be a little windy, and getting cold. Highest temperature of 4 degree, lowest of -1 degree. And it will get colder and colder. Thursday is going to be cloudy, a highest temperature of 2 degree, a lowest temperature of -5. On Friday, it's going to rain. Also very windy, so better put on some warm cloth for that day. A highest temperature of -5 degree, a lowest temperature of -10 degree.

Answer 1

总：degree是可数名词，应在末尾加s，即9 degrees。
第一句：因为用了next修饰Monday，所以在next之前应加入定冠词the。第一句用了不定主语it，后半句宾语不能使用has，应改为with。
第二句：应为前句用了将来时，此句应与之呼应，所以应该为it's continuing to，has改with，原因同上。
第三句：get呼应的谓语是going to而不是be，应将getting改为get。
第四句：无误。
第五句：无误。
第六句：无误。
第七句：无误。
第八句：句子衔接有误，导致后一句无主语，建议改为On Friday，it's going to rain，and be very windy

译文：下个星期一是一个晴天，最高温度9摄氏度，最低温度5摄氏度。星期二也是个天气晴朗的日子，最高温度12摄氏度，最低温度可达6摄氏度以下。星期三会有微风，这使得空气变得寒冷，最高温度和最低温度分别是4摄氏度和零下1摄氏度。变冷的势头不会停下。星期四是多云的一天，最高温度和最低温度分别是2摄氏度和零下5摄氏度。星期五会有降雨，并伴有微风，英雌最好在那天穿暖和点，因为最高温度和最低温度分别是零下5摄氏度和零下10摄氏度。

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Answer 2

it's going to be sunny next Monday, can reach a highest temperature of 9 degree and a lowest of 5 degree. and it will continue to be fine on Tuesday, with a highest temperature of 12 degree and possibly a lowest temperature of 6degree.Wendsday is going to be a little windy and getting cold. with a highest temperature of 4 degree and a lowest of -1 degree. it will get colder and colder. Thursday is going to be cloudy with a highest temperature of 2 degree and a lowest of -5. Friday is likely to rain and get windy. so better put on some warm clothes on that day. A highest temperature of -5 degree, a lowest temperature of -10 degree.

Answer 3

第一行on next的on去掉 然后整篇文章的时态应该是将来时 所以has应改为will have