谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误

Question

Holle. I am a student of Grade eight.
I like play basketball and play computer games.
My Favorite subject is P.E. Because it can help me keep healthy.

My favorite color is black, because it’s cool.
In ten years. I think I will be a teacher, because I can help many people.
I will live in Beijing. It’s really a beautiful city.
I will keep a dog, because it’s very lovelyIn my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
My English is not good , So I will try my best to learn English .
My report end. Thanks .
Question
What do I like?
In ten years, What will I to be?
What color do I like?
Why do I want to be a teacher?

Answer 1

第一行：holle—>hello

第二行：I like play basketball and play computer games—>I like playing basketball and playing computer games, like 后面加动词ing形式是固定搭配，另外computer games前面的playing与前面的play重复，可以省略

第五行：In ten years,I think I will be a teacher, because I can help many people.
翻译过来是“十年后我想我会成为一个老师，因为我可以帮助很多人”因果有误，你想想你能帮助很多人是你将成为一个老师的原因还是结果呢？有两种改法：
(1)I think I will be a teacher, so that I can help many people（我将成为一个老师，这样我就能帮助很多人）
(2)I want to be a teacher, because they can help many people（我想成为一个老师，因为老师能帮助很多人）

第十行：My report end. Thanks —>主语单数，end 改为ends

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Answer 2

I like play basketball and play computer games.这句把play改为playing

Answer 3

I like play ingand playing computer games
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