The story was about a blind girl for being robbed and leave originally familiar road, through the fence in the unknown world, against the visual senses outside on a great adventure.
最明显的就是时态上的问题。 改正过来的句子应该是这样的:"The story was about a blind girl who had been robbed and left original familiar road, passed though the fence in the unknown world, against the visual senses outside on a great adventure."