帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误【英语】

Question

帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误【英语】i think shanghai is a interesting city that is not only for its fun.大小写忽略

Answer 1

这里不需要用到从句，另外你用到了not only 就得有配套的but(also), 这句可以这样改：
I think Shanghai is an interesting city, not only for [its cultural diversity] but also for[ the fact that I love it].

其中括号里的两个内容你可以自己更换的。追问

but for后面加it can gives us pleasure 怎么改?

追答

...but for the fact that it gives us pleasure.

Answer 2

1 a改为an。
2 句子中的定语从句没有任何意义。追问

我就是想表达 我之所以认为上海是一个有趣的城市，并不只是因为它的多面化。那该怎么表达比较好

Answer 3

Don't asking that why I aren't great as others.

Answer 4

a是一个问题
还有就是不太能看懂你想表达什么意思
i think shanghai is an interesting city，not just because of its diversity.

Answer 5

I think Shanghai is an interesting city which is not only for its fun.(三处修改：大小写，a应该是an,限定型定语从句应该用which.

Answer 6

is not 改成isn’t