英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出，谢谢

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英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出，谢谢

i can surf the internet again
i have been used to be without the internet for two weeks.now i am able to surf the internet again.doday i am not feeling that happy because the conservator asked me not to live in my domitory ,i am angry with her .she said some words,which depressed me.i don't want to mention it any more.any way i am not feeling happy.but now i can surf the internet.so i can relax myself and i can throw off the bad mood.just now i watched the gossip girl.and i am feeling much better now .and my roomates told me ignore it .so it is .live my life.just as it is.

Answer 1

"used to be" 去了

am able to 改为can be able to 表示有..能力 而can 单纯地表示可以 能

doday--today 这是写错了吧

that -- so 如此地 那么地 都用so

and I am angry..

the gossip-- a gossiping

told me to

还有记得大小写要分明噢 全小写其实看着挺别扭的

Answer 2

第一行就有啦 be 后面应该有谓语的 再往后看整篇都有问题 时态问题比较严重 很难改 不好意思了 没时间

Answer 3

问题不大 注意你打字错误 doday-today
那句she said some words,...从正式英语来说最好该成she said something which depressed me.倒数第二句，and my roomates told me to ignore her.ignore后面最好跟人，就是说忽视那个人做的事．语法方面还不错 没有什么问题．