自己写了一个英语句子，请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没。或者有什么更好的表达方式。谢谢了~~

Question

You may looked timid in a certain aspect as you are not proficient. When you strong enough in the area, you can do the thing confident. But we should know, to be a better man should spend time in practicing.

Answer 1

You may looked timid in a certain aspect as you are not proficient. When you ARE strong enough in the area,you can do thingS confidently.But we should know, only more practice leads to a better man.
希望帮到你了，语法小问题。表达方式可以转换一下。

Answer 2

you may not appear to be self assured if you are not proficient in something. you certainly are full of confident in things which you are good at. a better man knows practice makes perfect.