帮我看看这句英语有语法错误吗？高分啊！

Question

With the development of economy and society, sustained social progress and continuous improvement of people's living standard, competition is increasingly fierce.
我是想问！一共前面有3个分句，前两个包括一个用and连接的句子里都没有谓语，和后面这句话有整体结构上有问题吗？

Answer 1

语法上没有什么问题，但是整个句子看起来就显得头重脚轻了，可把状语后置，改为：

Competition is getting more and more fierce with the development of economy, the sustained progress of society and the continuous improvement of people's living standard.

更可简化一点，因为你的翻译十分的中式英语。

Competition is getting more and more fierce with the continuous development of economy and socity and the continuous improvement of people's living standard.

Answer 2

没有问题的，前面那些全是状语，主句是最后competition那句，主语谓语动词就是is,但是有个错误，在最后一句，应该是increasing fiercely，increase是动词ing,firecely才是副词啊

Answer 3

没有问题啊，前面就是用with写了一些伴随着的情况，后面说的完整句子就是这种形势下发生的事情了。

Answer 4

没什么大问题，但中文烙印太强而且有点头重脚轻，不如改成根基扎实的as结构较好：
Competition is getting increasingly fierce as the economy and society develop, social progress sustains and people's living standard improves continuously.本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 5

没有问题，with引导状语从句，作“伴随”讲