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Write an essay of around 300 words on the following topic:
While most young people believe that romantic love is the most important condition for marriage, quite a lot of older people maintain that a marriage based on romance alone will not last long, for a sence of responsibility is most essential to a successful marriage.
What are the causes of the difference in opinion?What is your stand?
这是我写的作文：
The Elements Of The Successful Marriage
Bertrand Russell said,”The good life is one inspired by love and guided by knowledge.”We can concered that love is the forever team of mankind.Nowadays many people also said that love is the vital element of marriage, while others would suppose that in order to make a successful marriage, instead of love, responsibility is the essence of it.Besides, young people would choose the former view, whereas the older citizens are apt to agree the latter one.In this short essay I would like to analyse the reason of surely difference opinion and stand my own in it.

Young people always full of enthusiasm and passion.In this way, when they fall in love, they can image many romantic things to reflect how much they love their sweetheart.In addition,most of them are students,they have not came on the stage and without work experience, so they might wonder the world fill with harmonious and imagination. At this time, in their opinion, love is the only condition for marriage.

As people grow up, they enter the sociaty, and become deeply experience that life is very hard, they should try their best to earn money to support their families and get working relate stress. Now they have no times to image the romantic things because they are busy working. Job hunting, buy apartment and bring up the children and so on.Many of things make them exhausted entirely.Romantic is so abstract which is useless when they get in a hard situation.All do they want is a responsible spouse who would take care of them when they feel tired.

In my view, I suppose that if you want a successful marriage,to find a responsible spouse is more important than a romantic one.For example, if you get sick,a responsible spouse would look after you carefully while a spouse full of imagination would only bring you a useless rose.Year after year, you would find that the fact is cruel and a steady marriage also means to be understand and responsible rather than only with love.
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Answer 1

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Answer 2

In this short essay I would like to analyse why people hold difference opinions and express my own ideas.

Young people are always enthusiastic and passionate. Therefore, when they fall in love, they can perform many romantic things to show how much they love their sweetheart. In addition,most of them are students who haven't any work experience, so they might look at the world fill with harmonious and imagination. At this time, in their opinion, love is the only condition for marriage.
As people grow up, they enter the sociaty, and experience life themselves. They might figure out out that life is really hard while they should try their best to earn money to support their families in spite of working-related stress. Now they have no times to perform the romantic things because they are busy working, job hunting, buying apartment and bringing up the children and so on.Many of the things make them exhausted entirely. Romantic is so abstract which is useless when they get in a hard situation.All they want is a responsible spouse who would take care of them when they feel tired.

In my view, if you want a successful marriage,to find a responsible spouse is more important than a romantic one.For example, if you get sick,a responsible spouse would look after you carefully while a spouse full of imagination would only bring you a useless rose.Year after year, you would find that the fact is cruel and a steady marriage also means to support each other and be responsible rather than only talk about love.本回答被提问者采纳