最右边这幅有三处需要改动：
1）Because of the above resons，建议改成： Due to the above reasons；
2）difficultly要改成形容词：difficult
3）conclude that，有了that，后面应该接从句，建议改成：it is not difficult to conclude that tobaco prodution tends to decrease in the future.追问
1）Because of the above resons，建议改成： Due to the above reasons；
2）difficultly要改成形容词：difficult
3）conclude that，有了that，后面应该接从句，建议改成：it is not difficult to conclude that tobaco prodution tends to decrease in the future.追问
好的，谢谢你，按照你说的改，我感觉我的作文瞬间得到升华🤗
您方便帮我再看看第二页的吗？我之前上传的图片好像不是很清楚
拜托啦🙏
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