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Question

Last Saturday afternoon,we were playing basketball on the playground.Suddenly,a player of the other side stole in back court and made a fast break.Our monitor WangGang tried to deny the ball.The player ran so quick that he couldn't stop when WangGang deny tne ball.He ran into WangGang.They are all fell.WangGang tried to fall to the left side in order to not fall under him.But it was so late.The player fell onto WangGang's right leg.We were frightened because he couldn't move his leg!Teacher came and helped us to carry him to hosiptal.
The other day,we looked in him,the doctor said his leg has fracture.He has to stay in bed for at least five mouths.We are very sad.

中文是：上周六下午，我们正在操场上打篮球。突然，对方的一名球员在后场抄截，打起快攻。我们的班长王刚试图绕前防守。对方的那个球员跑得太快了，以至于不能在王刚绕前防守时停下来。他和王刚撞在了一起。他们都摔到了。王刚为了不让那个球员压在自己身上，试图向左边摔到。但是太晚了。那个球员摔到了王刚的右腿上。我们非常害怕因为他不能移动他的退了！老师帮助我们把他送到了医院。
第二天，我们去看望他，医生说他的腿骨折了。他不得不在床上养伤五个月。我们都很伤心。

Answer 1

Saturday afternoon, we were playing basketball on the court. Suddenly, a player from the opponent team stole the ball in the back court and started a fast break. Our class president Wang Gang tried to defense by moving to the front. However, opponent player ran too fast and avoided Wang Gang's defense. Unfortunately, Wang Gang and the player ran into each other and both fell on the floor. In order to avoid putting his entire body weight on the opponent player, Wang Gang tried to land on the left side when falling. But it was all too late, the opponent player fell on Wang's right leg. We were all very afraid that he wasn't able to move his leg anymore. The teacher helped us to take him to the hospital. We visited Wang the following day and the doctor said his leg was fractured. He had no choice but to rest on bed for 5 months. We were all disappointed and sad for this unfortunate event.

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