【英语高手务必进!】在线求助!!!写了一篇英语作文。其中几句话帮忙看看有没有语法错误!答对者必赏!

写了一篇英语作文,其中几个从句自己不确定是否对。希望各位英语大神来帮忙!
1.When I was sick,the person who always took care of me was my mother.
2.When I was sad, the first person who made me happy was always my mother.
就两句话!神速啊~~~

1.When I am sick,the person who always takes care of me is my mother.
2.When I am sad, the first person who makes me happy is always my mother.
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第1个回答  2012-12-17
when I get ill, the person who always takes care of me is my mother.

when I am sad, the first person that always makes me happy is my mother.
为什么要用过去时?
第2个回答  2012-12-18
除了时态有问题,其他都没问题。因为你表达的是你妈妈一直都是这么做的,以前是,现在难道不是吗?
除非现在你妈妈不会经常这样做了,那你就用一般过去时。
第3个回答  2012-12-17
1. correct
2..When I was sad, the first person who always made me happy was my mother.
第4个回答  2012-12-17
恩恩,没有问题,定语从句,运用没有问题,完全正确
第5个回答  2012-12-18
第二句的 who要改成 that 。因为先行词有first 修饰
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