帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误，谢谢，要快，在线等。

题目是以English and me。

English is very important in the world。Because many countrys are useing English。I think study English must hard。But I am not study hard。And my English Is not very well ，Sometimes I think English is ery difficult。But Sometimes I think it is interesting too。I will study hard in the future。I will read English every day。I will listen English songs。And I will try to talk with my classmates in English。I thingk I will study English ery well。

举报该问题

其他回答

第1个回答 2011-10-27

改了一遍，没有做颜色标记，把单词拼错的，标点打错的和比较重复的句子改了。你大体上写的不错，要注意细节，加油！
English is very important in the world.Because people in many countries speak English.I think we must study English hard.But I do not study hard enough, so my English Is not very well. Sometimes I think English is very difficult,but sometimes I think it is interesting. I will study harder in the future.I will read English every day, listen to English songs, and try to talk with my classmates in English. I think if I can do them my English will be much better.

第2个回答 2011-10-28

English is very important in the world。Because many countrys are useing English。I think study English , must be hard。And I do not study hard。And my English Is not very good ，Sometimes I think English is ery difficult。But Sometimes I think it is interesting too。I will study hard in the future。I will read English every day。I will listen to English songs。And I will try to talk with my classmates in English。I thingk I will study English ery well。我建议你写句子是多变换几次主语，换几种表达方式，这样读起来的话，感觉要自然一些，你的已经很不错啦，再接再厉，希望能帮到你

第3个回答 2011-10-27

除了几个打错了的地方,没有什么语法错误,什么very,think,不过你是想说学英语必须很努力吗?如果是的话,就没问题了,只是我觉得这个顺序问题,觉得有些前后不搭的样子,那个useing,拼写应该是using,我觉得这个地方用speaking比较好.

第4个回答 2011-10-27

countries为复数形式
i think that study english must be hard
but i do not study hard
i will listen to english songs

有些错误已经帮你改过来了加油学习本回答被提问者采纳

第5个回答 2011-10-27

English is very important in the world。Because many countries are using English。I think I should study English hard。But I do not study hard。And my English is not very good ，Sometimes I think English is evry difficult,though sometimes I think it is interesting too。I will study hard in the future。I decide to read English every day。I will listen to English songs。And I will also try to talk with my classmates in English。I thingk I will study English very well。。

1 2 下一页

相似回答

请帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误 谢谢答：Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travel with me, 改为 Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travelled/have travelled with me, 时态不正确 I can’t stop to cry 改为 I can’t stop crying 意思是”禁不住落泪“because we have so many good time tog...

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误答：没啥语法错误，就是第一句话看起来怪怪的，如果是我会这样写：there are many ways to save(protect) our environment.后面没什么错，可以提几点建议：1.firstly, secondly等等这些，因为列的太多，所以不要列为好,列一般是有限的几条情况下用比较好，你可以直接用分号就行。2.中间有很多小句子，...

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误答：语法错误好像没有。但我可以指几点可以改的地方。1.He found that listening is more difficult .这句话，最好改成最高级，He found that listening is the most difficult.你本身句子并没有错误，但根据前后文，和其他2项做下比较，因为用最高级比较好点。2He couldn't understand every word。还...

请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误,O(∩_∩)O谢谢答：shouldn’t easily 【give up】 what we do. If we make up our minds, and try again and again, we will finally get the sunshine we want. As the saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves. Success only belongs to those who have strong wills.”希望回答对你有帮助 ...

谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文的语法这些错没有?谢了答：she always take care of 后面必须跟名词性结构，而 we are one family 是个句子，所以错，而且 we are one family life，逻辑错误，因为我们拥有 life，但我们本身并不是 life。另外，英语中凡是独立的句子后面一定要用句号，不能一逗到底。以下是修改后的：My family has three members, my ...

我写的英语作文请帮我看下有没有语法错误请帮忙改正谢谢答：1 in our dormitory maybe have some controversy，有语法错误，把in去掉，把maybe改为may 2 we can have a good rest and put our heart into study个人认为把put in to 改为concentrate one,mind on比较好还是尽量不用heartS吧 3 I beliveve it is high time that we took some ...