谁能帮我看下我写的英语作文,看看有没有错误,谢谢
What the drawing reflects is the phenomenon that some people are irresponsible for their parents.With the development of the economy,people's life become more comfortable and convenient.However,the lack of responsibility of some people still exists.It is really a shame that youngsters pay much attention to the happiness of themself because without their parents they couldn't be what they have became.Nobody can imagine a nation that each person ignore their responsibility to support parents.
Fortunately,this phenomenon has caused the attention of the government,which is moving to head off this social issue.From my point of view,to solve this burning problem,it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the importance of supporting parents.Meanwhile,more educational campains should be initiated to publicize the traditional vitue.Only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.
特别感谢你的用心检阅,请接受我最真心的谢意!
还有有人说people's life become 要改成becomes对吗?
追答恩,是的,三单要加s
追问好的。收益匪浅,特别感谢!看一篇这种作文应该蛮费神吧?
哦哦。知道了,虽然不能选你为最佳,不过还是要道个谢你!3q!
好的,懂了。你英语很不错!可惜只能选一个最佳。还是谢谢你!
嗯。我得拆开成两句。不能选你为最佳表示抱歉,谢谢你的用心!
抱歉不能选你为最佳。还是很感谢!