自从我在中学接触了物理这么学科,我就喜欢上了它,我想学习电子电气工程方向和机械工程方向的专业知识,我梦想成为一名设计师或者管理者,为今后在该领域发展奠定理论基础。希望能够在上海理工大学中英国际学院得到良好的专业教育,并在这个平台上继续深造硕士和博士。为了这个目标,我想首先提高我的英语水平,然后积极参加学校组织的各种活动,积极做好每一件事情。进入中英国际学院,我看重的是该校的先进的教育理念和宽阔的教育视野,我觉得我会为自己以后的成就,在学院内努力学习,像我刚才所说的一样,让自己尽快提高,让自己能够成为一个全面的人才而努力。
这么高分没人翻译?我擦,这世界怎么了?
还能再加点么,要300个字以上。这个是我的申请要求,你看看再哪里加一点
个人陈述要求:
• 全英文,300字以上
• 对自己的认识和将来的计划,如想学习什么专业以及心目中理想的职业
• 有何理想,打算采取怎样的步骤来实现
• 为什么希望进入中英国际学院,将会怎样度过在中英国际学院的学习
这个需要你给出中文。
追问大哥,我编不出来了啊,你写的东西,你知道在哪里加什么比较好,你帮我一下,直接给你最佳,你要多分还可以给,我真的编不下去了,我相信你能行的,对吧?
追答Since I began to study physics, i fell in love with it. The subject helps me with my careful thought, not only in the study, but also in my life. I can help my friends handle some problems.to have right ideas on regular life.After graduation from senior high school, I want to learn something about the electric engineering and mechanic engineering. This kind of subject is popular at first, meanwhile it is also widely used in daily life. Sometimes I dream to be a designer or a manager, which set bases for me on the development in this field. I hope i can get a better education in Sino-England International College of USST, then for master and doctor degrees with the help of this platform. At the beginning I would like to enhance my English level. I will try my best to read some English materials related to the subject and some other aspects. Secondly, I'd like to be active in all kinds of avtivities organized by the school and do them well. By involvement of these activites, I will know how to organize, how to cooperate, how to communicate with other students.I specially appreciate the modern education value and broad education vision. Some famous universities are also have the same value and vision. That's why they can train useful graduates, and work for the social development.
I have the feeling that I will be a person with comprehensive skills which makes me proud of myself. I will work hard and improve as soon as possible just like I said just now. I have set a clear target for me, and I believe I can realize it with my industrous work.
你能不能再多加几个词语啥的,然后凑满300字,多给你加分
机翻的吧= =,我要人翻的!手工制作的!你这个改几个词语也太假了吧......我猜,你是用有道在线翻译= =。如果你保证你是自己翻译的或者怎样,你发誓我就给你最佳,= =
那你行不行?行我还加分,别扯没用的