总分15分的英语作文这样写能得多少分，我们是用电脑考的，后面那收件人我也没有移到最右

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总分15分的英语作文这样写能得多少分，我们是用电脑考的，后面那收件人我也没有移到最右Dear John,
Thank you for your generous support.
I received the workbook of M5693 from you, which I have asked for on Dec. 10th of 2017. The workbook is beneficial for training operators in company.
Thank you again. Finally, I sincerely wish every success in your work.
Yours truly,
Wendy

Answer 1

格式基本正确，有几处语法问题，意思基本上按要求表达了。大概10分左右吧。