请英语高手帮我点评一下这篇四级英语作文，非常感谢(语法和用词，如果总分15分，你能给我多少）

Question

1：据调查显示，现在大学生每月的花销越来越高，很多大学生花钱如流水，根本没有节俭的概念。
2：分析产生这一现象的原因
3：我的看法
Extravagant Spending on college Campus
Now many college students spend more and more ,they spend as the runnning water without the idea of thrifty,according to a survey.
There are many reasons for this situation.First,most of college studengts don't know the difficulty of earn money.Second ,they don't go through the tough life and know the trouble of life.Third,they advocates the famous brand ,they are pride of their clothes but not their study.
As to me ,I think everyone should save money whatever you have much money or not,specially the college students .Moreover ,the college students'fee is most from their parents ,they can't earn much money when they still as a student.So they must save money and shouldn't spend extravagant .In a world ,thirfty is a traditional virtue ,we should save money but shouldn't save extravagant.

Answer 1

基本可以，我给10分。。。已经不错了。有一些语法错误和汉式英语。还有及物动词与不及物动词的错用，specially应该是尤其ESPECIALLY ，In a world ？？这是什么意思》再看看 ，the difficulty of earn money？？of后面是动词？有一些语法错误和拼词错误，整体上内容不错。。可以得10分。。呵呵。。我提示了一点点，自己查一下吧

Answer 2

语法有待加强，单词的属性也应强记！

Answer 3

根据小弟考了2次才过四级的经验来看，第一，字数看上去好像不符合要求（120字？），第二，第一段里面的“Now many college students spend more and more ”语法好像有点问题吧，花销在这里应该是名词，而你的是动词。第二段有几个词用的不错，不过感觉太过简洁了。第三段也不错，如果第二段更详细一点就好了。
呵呵，个人愚见。11分吧

Answer 4

对不住哥们，只能给8分。