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Question

The 29th Olumpics has been over. do you know what does beijing look like now after that? let me it for you.

After the 2008 Beijing Olympics .Beijing become more ande more beautiful. There are more trees and grass in Beijing now. They make us very happy.And there are more and more visitors come to Beijing, they all want to know what does the capital of China look like.

Frome now on, We should improve our environment, make Beijing more clean and more nice . We should also often do exercise to keep ourselves fit .

Let's make beijing nicer and nicer together. I belive we can do it .

语法错误请指出 不当地方也请修改 谢谢

Answer 1

The 29th Olympics are over. Do you know what Beijing look like now after that? Let me introduce it for you.

After the 2008 Beijing Olympics, Beijing becomes more and more beautiful. There are more trees and grass in Beijing now. They make us very happy. And there are more and more visitors to Beijing, they all want to know what the capital of China looks like.

From now on, we should improve our environment; make Beijing cleaner and nicer. We should also often do exercise to keep ourselves fit.

Let's make Beijing nicer and nicer together. I believe we can do it.

Answer 2

1. The 29th Olumpics has been over.
29届奥运会应该是 The 29th Olumpic Games
2. Do you know what does beijing look like now after that?
做好用 after it.
3. let me it for you.
句子不通顺，不明白要说什么，似乎想表达“让我给你描述一下”？那么可以这样说：Let me describe it to you, 或者：Let me tell you about it.

4. After the 2008 Beijing Olympics .Beijing become more and more beautiful.
建议改为： Beijing has become more and more beautiful since the 2008 Beijing Olympic .
5. There are more trees and grass in Beijing now. They make us very happy.
合成一句更有文采：There are more trees and grass in Beijing now making us very happy. （用的是句型 there be ... doing ...）
6. And there are more and more visitors come to Beijing,
正好是上面括号中提供的那个句型，所以come用动词原形式错误的，改为：coming to Beijing。如果为避免与上句雷同，可以改为定语从句：who come to Beijing
7. they all want to know what does the capital of China look like.
what does the capital of China look like是 know的宾语从句，而不是疑问句，因此不能够采用倒装语序，改为：what the capital of China look s like
8. Frome now on, We should improve our environment, make Beijing more clean and more nice . 无可挑剔
9. We should also often do exercise to keep ourselves fit .
应该讲do exercises，用单数不对。
Let's make beijing nicer and nicer together. I belive we can do it . 最后一句很好。本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

do you know 应为Do you know
let 应Let
let me it for you. 改为 to you
become 改为 has become
We should improve 的we要大写
We should improve our environment, make Beijing改为We should improve our environment to make Beijing
nice 改为 nicer
你的作文不错 不过大小写的地方要注意 有个别我没有给你改

Answer 4

自己写了一篇，供你参考。
Beijing Is More Beautiful Now
Beijing, the capital city of China,is much more beautiful after the the 29th Olympic Games.Now more trees and grass can be seen in every street and road.The surroundings are more beautiful and the air is fresher,and more buildings,such as the Bird Nest and the Water Cuber have been set up.Thanks to its great changes,Beijing has attracted more visitors both from at home and abroad.Hower,we can do something more for the city.We should make every effort to improve our environment and do more exercises to keep ourselves fit.