请帮忙修改下英语作文

Question

Miriam wolf wrote a very positive review of Tannen`s book-You`re wearing that?In San Francisco chronicle on January 22,2006.
In her opinion the writer is linguistics guru,her bestseller you just understand revolutionized communication between men and women.Now, in her new book she takes on what is potentially the most fraught and passionate connection of women’s lives: the mother-daughter relationship.

As for the main ideas from the book,Wolf reports that the principal tension in most relationships,is mothers and daughters struggle to find the right balance between closeness and independence.Apart from this,another problem is when they misunderstand the metamessage(implied meaning of the message) in their conversations,when the mothers give advice,the daughters take as criticism.

Wolf concludes that Tannen not only analyzes and decodes scores of conversations between mom and daughters,but also helps you to improve your own relationships.All of these are from her students,colleagues and her own experiences.

Answer 1

字面上看，感觉除了个别大小写错/标点符号错以及书名没有斜体外，其他都很不错啊。试着改了一下，因为没有上下文，有些地方可能我的理解有误，仅供你参考。
第一段：Miriam Wolf wrote a very positive review of Tannen's book——You're Wearing That? (应为斜体) in San Francisco Chronicle on January 22, 2006.
第二段： In her opinion the writer is linguistics guru. Her bestseller You Just Understand (应为斜体) revolutionized communication between men and women. Now, in her new book she takes on what is potentially the most fraught and passionate connection of women’s lives: the mother-daughter relationship.
第三段： As for the main ideas of the book,Wolf reports that the principal tension in most relationships, is mothers and daughters struggle to find the right balance between closeness and independence. Apart from this, another problem is when they misunderstand the metamessage (implied meaning of the message) in their conversations, when the mothers give advice, the daughters take as criticism.
第四段： Wolf concludes that Tannen not only analyzes and decodes scores of conversations between moms and daughters, but also helps us to improve our own relationships.experiences. All of her ideas are inspired from her students,colleagues and her own experiences.