请帮忙看下这个英语句子有语法问题吗?谢谢

in the picture above are two poor men that lose a leg.but they have never been depressed.so,they optimistically cooperate with each other.

in the picture above are two poor men that lose a leg.but they have never been depressed.so,they optimistically cooperate with each other. 

two poor man that lose a leg给人的印象是两个人少一条腿,实际表达的是每一人少一条腿,可以表达为

In the picture above are two poor men who lose their legs but have never been depressed and have been optimistically cooperating with each other. 

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第1个回答  2019-10-29
第一句有点问题,按照所给场景应该翻译为:The above in the picture are two men who lose legs.此句中定语从句的引导词不可用that 应该用who. So改为And,略去they,cooperate改为过去分词cooperated.这样整个句子就通顺了。
第2个回答  2019-10-29
two poor man that each loses a leg
不是两个人一共少一条腿,应该是一人少一条;
but they are never depressed

现在完成时想表达的是“到目前为止都没灰心”,联系上下文看这种表达有点奇怪,可以用现在时表达“一直不灰心”的意思。
不算是语法错误,只是意思表达有问题。
第3个回答  2019-12-30
回答如下:本句有误,that lose 应该改成each / either of whom loses, 或者of whom each / either loses。 另外,去掉so。最后一个句子要么单独成句,要么成为前面句子的并列句,即…depressed and they…。
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