请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“1. 朋友和他的家人晚上请客吃了一顿饭，算是中秋节。。。”

Question

（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）

中文部分：
1. 朋友和他的家人晚上请客吃了一顿饭，算是中秋节的聚餐，很感动；
2. 我花费了很大的经历才将这周的AP（一门课程）的quiz完成了60%；
3. NE（一门课程）再网上看了中文的视频之后，我终于对“VLSM”（这门课的一个知识点）有了一点概念。

我的翻译：
1. One of my friend and his family invited me having a dinner together tonight, it could be seen as a Mid-Autumn dinner and made me very appreciated it.
2. I spent a lot of energy and only finished 60% in the quiz of AP this week;
3. After watching Chinese language online video of NE, I finally got some basic idea about VLSM.

Answer 1

中文部分：
1. 朋友和他的家人晚上请客吃了一顿饭，算是中秋节的聚餐，很感动；
2. 我花费了很大的经历才将这周的AP（一门课程）的quiz完成了60%；
3. NE（一门课程）再网上看了中文的视频之后，我终于对“VLSM”（这门课的一个知识点）有了一点概念。

你的翻译：Hello 又是我啊，下面是我给你更正。
1. One of my friend(friends "of" 之後要用复数) and his family invited me (having 前面是动词要用 to have) a dinner together(应加上with them) tonight, it could be seen as a Mid-Autumn dinner and made me very appreciated it. (这句的表达上并不正确，所以我替你重写如後: we could call it just a dinner gathering of the Mid-Autumn festival, which made me most appreciated. )
2. I spent a lot of energy and (加could) only finished(could 之後要改为finish) 60% in the quiz of AP this week;
3. After watching Chinese language online video of NE, I finally got some basic idea(s) about VLSM.

Answer 2

1.friend应改为friends,invited me to have...,it前不能用逗号隔开应加上and,seen改成regarded,dinner后加逗号然后是which made me...it不要
2.energy后写finishing 60%...照抄
3.idea后加s
望采纳哦

Answer 3

One of my friend and his family invited me (to have) a dinner together tonight, it could be seen as a Mid-Autumn dinner and made me very (impressed) .

After watching Chinese language video of NE (online)

Answer 4

. One of my friends and his family invited me to have a dinner together tonight, it could be seen as a Mid-Autumn dinner and made me very appreciated .
2. I spent a lot of energy and l just finished 60% in the quiz of AP this week;
3. After watching Chinese online video of NE, I finally got some basic ideas about VLSM.