错误：
it is +adj.+that……这是一个句型
than前面应该用比较级（we are busier with study than ever）
介词后面应该是动词的ing形式(about dealing with stress)
the suggestion is+名词/动名词/从句（作文中的是名词，不用加that）
such as 和 so on不能连用(such as playing table tennis, playing basketball或者playing basketball, playing table tennis, playing football and so on)
倒数第二个单词写错了，应该是released
作文：
It's true that we are busier with study than ever. I feel tired every day. But I have two suggestions about dealing with stress. The first suggestion is doing sports, such as playing table tennis, playing basketaball. The second is listening to music. I think that it is a good way to dealing with stress.
In a word, these suggestions will help you feel better and continue to move forward with a released heart.(我觉得没有with a released heart更好)追问
it is +adj.+that……这是一个句型
than前面应该用比较级（we are busier with study than ever）
介词后面应该是动词的ing形式(about dealing with stress)
the suggestion is+名词/动名词/从句（作文中的是名词，不用加that）
such as 和 so on不能连用(such as playing table tennis, playing basketball或者playing basketball, playing table tennis, playing football and so on)
倒数第二个单词写错了，应该是released
作文：
It's true that we are busier with study than ever. I feel tired every day. But I have two suggestions about dealing with stress. The first suggestion is doing sports, such as playing table tennis, playing basketaball. The second is listening to music. I think that it is a good way to dealing with stress.
In a word, these suggestions will help you feel better and continue to move forward with a released heart.(我觉得没有with a released heart更好)追问
好的谢谢了
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第1个回答 2015-11-08
你的字母要改改 等高中了 高考改卷的时候看的是字好不好看 好看的字分都会高3--5分 我妈就是英语老师 改过两次卷追问
我的字我觉得还可以啊=_=
和同学比起来不算最好但是还可以吧……你说说有什么问题 哪里要改
追答你初中的把 高中来说 你的字确实一般般 要有自己的风格 你的字太普通了 不是自夸也没骗你 全校英语字比赛我三年都是第一 我英语每次都是靠字好看而得分高的 但我语法不怎么好 马马虎虎
追问能举个例子吗什么风格
我见过同学把y的勾拉的老长了 一点也不好看
追答不不不 不是说把y.g.j的勾拉长就好看 字体的好看注重黄金比例 长一点好看 但不要老长老长的 很作 主要是自己去体悟一个字母的比例 多去看看比你好看的字的同学 借鉴往往比关门造车来得容易又效率
第2个回答 2015-11-08
dealing with the first suggestion is 后面不用加that
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