谁能帮我写一篇英语作文？急

Question

In your life,there should have been some teachers who left you a deep impression. Write a 120-word article about An Unforgettable Teacher.

Answer 1

我可以帮你写吖···但你多给我点积分好了=v=

嘿嘿、、好了好了···谁让俺素好人捏~

It was unforgettable for me to met a exceptional math teacher in my life.Mrs Chen is my math teacher.She is an old and grey woman who has teached students for over 30 years.We are her students which were the last class.I also can't do well in math,I'm puzzled when I face the math ,so that I don't like it anymore.Inspite of me who is bad in math,Mrs Chen still tought me patienly. Owing to her kindness , I decided to learned harder.As I got the good grades in math , I sobbed,and Mrs Chen commended me.
Now, Mrs Chen had retired,but I still remember her who gave me the warm hand and make me mature not only in math but also in the life.

楼上那位语法有点错误吖····

不过13岁这么厉害就不错了-v-

Answer 2

I believe that there must be some teachers who left you a deep impression in your life.
Of course,there has been a teacher in my life who left me a deep impression.
That was my English teacher,Miss Xu.She had a long blonde hair and beautiful eyes.
She was a kind teacher and worked hard.She was far from the school so she had to catch the early bus everyday!
How exhausted.She had not only critic our English homework and take care of her baby.I wasn't intersted in English at than time.She told me to talk in English as much as possible.She asked me not to be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes.But she always forgot small things,like her glasses and money!
Well,now I chat with her on phone once a week.I really miss her because of her blonde hair,beautiful eyes,forgetting,distance and reasbonsbilities.

虽然不是很棒,还是勉强可以吧.
我也很喜欢英语的,需要你的支持噢!