My world has you in, then turns to be perfect 这句话有问题吗？

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Answer 1

这句子看似没有问题但纯粹是Chinese English 西方人很难理解，最好说:
It is tremendously great to have you with me, you have made my world perfect.
说英语直接讲感觉，不绕圈，就是这么简单!