英语错误检查，有劳了。

Question

检查以下语句的错误，并修正。希望有高手，指点下英文学习的要点

How many apples?
Three Apples.

How old is she?
She is eight years old.

What color is apple?
Apple is red.

What day is today?
Today is monday.

What time is it?
Eight.eighteen.

Which one is apple?
The apple is red.

Who is she?
She is a nurse.

Why are you late for school?
Because it is raining.

How are you?
I'm fine.

What can l do for you?
Yes,.....

When will the sun set?
The sun set at about six o'clock.

Where is apple?
The apple is on the table.

Which is the largest?
The first is largest.

Answer 1

How many apples?
Three Apples.
{不符合英语的表达习惯，没有主谓语，推荐改正：How many apples are there?
Three Apples.}

How old is she?
She is eight years old.
{没有错误}

What color is apple?
Apple is red.
{名词单个出现，在该情景下需要定冠词修饰：What color is the apple?
The apple is red.
也可以如下改正：What color are apples?
They are red.}

What day is today?
Today is monday.
{英语里问日期的固定用法：What day is it today?
Today is monday.
}

What time is it?
Eight.eighteen.
{固定回答格式：What time is it?
It is Eight.eighteen.
}

Which one is apple?
The apple is red.
{该句有点问题，可能是LZ写错了？}

Who is she?
She is a nurse.
{问职业：what is her job?而不能用who is she}

Why are you late for school?
Because it is raining.
{没什么错误这句，个人感觉}

How are you?
I'm fine.
{没有错误}

What can l do for you?
Yes,.....
{别人提供HELP，一般不这样回答，可以直接说你需要哪方面的帮助，也可以先礼貌性的说thanks}

When will the sun set?
The sun set at about six o'clock.
{对于日常生活规律性的，可以不用将来时，而用一般现在时
建议改正：When the sun set?
The sun set at about six o'clock.
}

Where is apple?
The apple is on the table.

{和上面的apple句一样，需要冠词，建议改正：
Where is the apple?
The apple is on the table.

}

Which is the largest?
The first is largest.
{建议改正：Which is the largest?
The first one is the largest. （或者The first is the largest.）
}

Answer 2

Which one is apple?
The apple is red.
用-- The red one. 比较好点

Which is the largest?
The first is largest. ----The first one is the largest.

Answer 3

What day is today?
问为What day is it today?
Today is monday.
Which is the largest?
The first is largest.
答为 The first one.

Answer 4

How many apples (are there)?
Three Apples.

What color is apple?
What is the color of apples?
Apple is red.
Apples are red.

What day is it today?
Today is monday.

Which one is apple?
The apple is red.
这样才对：
The red one is apple.

Who is she? 她是谁？这是身份的提问。
She is a nurse.（你的回答是她的职业）
问职业一般是What does she do?

Why are you late for school?
Because it is raining.
Because it was raining.

What can l do for you?
这个问题回答不会是yes, 而是直接跟需要帮助的事项。
这样才对：
Can I help you?
Yes,.....

Which is the largest?
问题中有the,回答也不能省。
The first is the largest.
要点？
个人认为兴趣是最重要的，这个问题直接关系到你能不能坚持。你如果没有恒心与耐心是肯定学不好的。