翻译成英文谢谢

在实习期间,XXX负责开发了XX ERP系统,之后参与了对客户的产品推介。由于保密原因,我们不能展示产品。
根据该学生在实习期间的表现以及对产品的评估,作为一个information的实习,我们给与90分的评分。
希望校方予以认可。

During the internship, xxx was in charge of the xx ERP system development, and took part in the pre-sales demonstration to the client. However, for confidential consideration, we are not able to display the production.

According to xxx's performance and the testing score of the production, as an information internship, we give 90 marks (out of 100?).

And I seek the confirmation from the college.
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第1个回答  2009-04-08
In practice, xxx was responsible for the development of the xx ERP system, and than he took part in the product promotion to the client. Because of keeping secret, we can't show the product.
According to the peerformance of the student in practice and the assessment of the product, we give him 90 points as a information's practice.
Hope the school side will recognize.
第2个回答  2009-04-08
英语八级即翻:

In practice, XXX is responsible for developed during the XX ERP system, after the involvement of the customer's product launch. Because we cannot display products.
According to the students in the practice of products during the performance assessment, and as an intern, we give the websites of 90.
Hope school.
第3个回答  2009-04-08
二楼翻译的很精确了