第1个回答 2009-05-09
lives去掉s has改为have
nowadays ， more and more people are moving to cities
mang改为many ，reason加s
the city's economy is more rich than country从没见过这种说法，直接说richer就行。
in the city has advanced equipements and advanced technology去掉in ，equipement不可数
very well改为good或better
the traffic is very convenient in the city这种说法是错的，可改为everywhere in the city is easily accessible 。
As a result.more and more people living in cities. living改为live
well改为 good
live in city,people living standard improre.是什么意思？打错了吧。是不是improve改为living in city，people's living standard is improved.
Besides there are very convenient for people's life in the city.错误真是太多了，我都看不懂最后一句
第2个回答 2009-05-09
live-living
decate-decates
has-nace
in-from
reason-reasons
country-in country
has-there have
conditions-condition
living-live
live_去掉
threre are-it is
Taking into consideration.I may reasonably conclude that living in cities. -above all,I would prefer to live in city .
第3个回答 2009-05-09
People live in cities has been brought into focus.Nowwadys,more and more people are moving in cities,acording to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase from the number of 24000 to 75300.There are many reasons accounting for living in cities.
Among all these reasons,the city's economy is more rich than country.In other words,in the city has advanced equipements and advanced technology.What's more the living conditions is very well in the city.In addition,the traffic is very convenient in the city.As a result.more and more people live in cities.
As far as I'm concerned,living in cities is well.First of all,live in city,people living standard improre.Besides it is very convenient for people's life in the city.Taking into consideration.I may reasonably conclude that we can live in cities.
第4个回答 2009-05-09
Living in cities
People living in cities have been brought into focus.Nowwadys,more and more people are moving into cities.According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of cities from 24,000 to 75,300.There are many reasons accounting for living in cities.
Among all these reasons,one is that the city's economy is richer than that of the country.In other words,cities have advanced equipement and advanced technology.What's more the living conditions are much better in cities.In addition,the traffic is very convenient in cities.As a result.more and more people are living in cities.
As far as I'm concerned,living in cities is good.First of all,living in cities improves people's living standard. people's life in cities is very convenient.Taking all the above factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that living in cities is a better choice.
第5个回答 2009-05-09
Nowwadys - nowadays
...sharp increase in the number of 24000 to 75300... - ...from 24000 to 75300 就可以了
There are mang reason accounting for living in cities. - These are the main reasons for living in cities
more rich - richer
country - the countryside
in the city - the city
equipements - equipment
What's more the - What's more, the
Traffic - Transportation
...More people living in cities. - More people are living in cities
improre - improve