英语翻译的小问题
他已经过了数学考试，我真为他感到自豪。明天他将会到达这里，并且让我去车站接他。我们晚上会在酒吧里面看场表演然后再去见john。对于这些我感到很激动，我希望他赶快到来。
这段话这么翻译对吗
he has passed the maths eaxm,i am very proud of him.He will arrived here tomorrow and he ask me to meet him at station.we will be watching a preformance at the club,we will meet with john then.i fell exceted about everthing.i hope he will arrive soon.
我是初学者，自己编了段话，请指点，谢谢！
exam
又修改了一下
He has passed the math exam. I am very proud of him. He will arrive here tomorrow and asked me to meet him at the station. we are going to watch a preformance at a club, and then meet John. I am very excited about these. I hope I can see him soon.
看到有不同人给了你不同答案，他们都有不同程度的错误。我身边坐着英国老公，你觉得应该采纳谁的呢？
追问为什么不用will be watching
追答Will be watching 是将来进行时只指一个点。用在你要强调在某个时间你会正在做什么。例如：I will be study when you come. 在你这段里是表示你明天的一个计划要用be going to 这个句型。如果你非要用will be watching, 就要说成 we wil be watching a performance when you comes等等。一定要指出时间的。
例句里我忘记加ing了， 打错了
I will be studying when you come.
最后那个you后面也应该是come。sorry！电脑打出来自动加了s
追问谢谢啦
已经过了考试是过去完成式，用had