Painting our dreams Draw out the dream possess in your heart Without distracting thoughts When times flies With rays of sunlight shine on your shoulder A gate will shown up Push it open Is a bright and fresh paint studio So, lets paint our dreams together.
这算是现代诗，我英文文学水平一般，凑乎凑乎吧
第2个回答 2013-03-17
Paint the dream Draw your dream in the heart Don't your thoughts When light passes Sunshine sprinkled on your shoulders There will be a door Pushed open Is a studio of pure and fresh Come and paint the dream together
希望是对的。。。追问
paint 可以换成 draw吗？ your thoughts 可以换成 mind 吗？
追答
第一个可以，第二个不行
第3个回答 2013-03-17
Painting our dreams Draw out the dream possess in your heart Without distracting thoughts When times flies With rays of sunlight shine on your shoulder A gate will shown up Push it open Is a bright and fresh paint studio So, lets paint our dreams together.
第4个回答 2013-03-17
Draws a dream Draw your dream Don't mind As time goes by The sunshine on your shoulder There will be a door Open Is a fresh studio Come together to draw dream.追问
sunshine 可以换成sunlight 吗
追答
sunshine 可以表达：n.阳光，日光；晴朗，晴天；太阳晒着的地方；欢乐
sunlight 只能表达： n.阳光
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第5个回答 2013-03-17
Paint the dream Draw your dream in the heart Don't your thoughts When time passes Sunshine sprinkled on your shoulders There will be a door Pushed open Is a studio of pure and fresh Come and paint the dream together