写一篇英语作文以‘an e-mail to my friend Jim’

Question

本题的写作要求为；你的朋友Jim假期想来你的家乡旅游，请你给他写一封e-mail介绍一下你家乡的气候，有趣的地方，美味的食物以及友好的人们。
对本题的写作指导分析；确定称呼，正文的开头可以对对方表示问候，也可以提及他上次的来信。组织正文，要有条理的列出要告诉朋友的事。写好结语束以及署名

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I hope you everything goes well.
Thanks for your mail and It's so nice to hear that you want to make a tourism to my hometown on you summer vocation.I can't help waiting to introduce the intersting things here and I believe you will love here and forget to leave. The climate here is very clear,raining in summer and snow in winter,Walking in the old street in rainy and viewing standing the bridge is very great. The street has been one thousand year and you can't image that you can see all the original buildings.People here are very friendly and they will be very warm to introduce the interesting things. Come on and we are waiting for you.

Sincerely yours.
John.码字不容易,如好请加分.

Answer 2

Dear Jim
How is everything? My hometown is very beautiful, There are fragrant flowers,crystal blue sky and green trees dotted with red fruits, In addition,people live in harmony, Besides,law and order are well-obied. Welcome to my hometown to experience the heaven-like life here.
I'm looking forward to your arrival.

Answer 3

Dear Jim,
I hope you everything goes well.
Thanks for your mail and It's so nice to hear that you want to make a tourism to my hometown on you summer vocation.I can't help waiting to introduce the intersting things here and I believe you will love here and forget to leave. The climate here is very clear,raining in summer and snow in winter,Walking in the old street in rainy and viewing standing the bridge is very great. The street has been one thousand year and you can't image that you can see all the original buildings.People here are very friendly and they will be very warm to introduce the interesting things. Come on and we are waiting for you.

Sincerely yours.
John.
亲爱的吉姆,我希望你一切顺利。谢谢你的邮件,很高兴听说你想要来我的家乡旅游在你暑假。我不能帮助等待介绍有趣的一些东西,我相信你会喜欢这里,忘记离开。这里的气候是非常明确的,下雨在夏天、冬天的雪,行走在古老的街道在雨季和查看站桥是非常伟大的。街上已经一千年,你不能图像,你可以看到所有的起源