日期我就不改了O(∩_∩)O哈！
August 24,2010 Tuesday
I went to visit the Great Wall with my friends during the summer vacation. We went there by bus. It took us about two hours to get there. It was hot and windy that day. There were thousands of people. When we saw a group of foreigners,we went up and talked with them. We told them lots of history of the Great Wall. They were very surprised when they saw that our English were exellent and we knew a lot about the Great Wall's history. They thanked us a lot and we really had a good time. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese.
30th July sunny
It was a sunny day. We decided to have a picnic outside the city. In the morning, we took an early bus to Nanhui. It was quite a colorful world. there were GREen trees, orange leaves,red peach blossoms. At noon, we reached the place, we sat by the river bank and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and so on. But all of a sudden, it began to rain. Unluckily there was no shelter nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry.
What an unforgettable picnic it was!
追问对了，第二篇能给个翻译下咩求求明天貌似要测验。
追答sorry，给晚了。。。
6月30日 晴
这是一个阳光灿烂的日子。我们决定去郊外野餐。在早晨，我们乘早班车去南汇。这是一个非常丰富多彩的地方。有绿色的树，橙色的树叶，红色的桃花。中午，我们到达了目的地，我们坐在河边，拿出了很多吃的东西，如面包，橙汁，苹果，蛋糕，鸡蛋等。但突然，开始下雨了。但不幸的是附近没有住所。我们不得不坐公共汽车匆忙回家匆忙。
这是一个多么难忘的野餐！