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Question

My favorite season

My favorite season is spring. Because spring is a colourful season. In spring, everything are getting up. The grass are green. The flowers are openning. Spring is warm. We can take off our coat, Can't wear dress. We need wear sweater. And in spring, there are a lot days; Women's Day, April fool‘s, Tomb-sweeping Day...
Spring is a nice season, isn't it?

Answer 1

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My favorite season is spring. Because spring is a colourful season. In spring, everything 【 is】 【 growing 】. The grass are green. The flowers are【 blooming】 . Spring is warm. We can take off our 【coats】, 【but we can't 】wear dress. We need 【 to 】wear 【sweaters】. And in spring, there are a lot of 【 festivals】, 【such as】 Women's Day, 【April fool‘s day】, and Tomb-sweeping Day.
Spring is a nice season, isn't it?
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Answer 2

纠错：
My favorite season is spring. Because spring is a colourful season. In spring, everything is growwing up. The grass are green. The flowers are openning. Spring is warm. We can get off our coat which can't wear . We need to wear sweater. And in spring, there are a lot of festivals; Women's Day, April fool‘s, Tomb-sweeping Day...
Spring is a nice season, isn't it?

翻译：
我最喜欢的季节是春天。因为春天是一个多姿多彩的季节。在春天，一切都在生长。草是绿色的。花朵开放。春天是温暖的。我们可以把我们不能穿的衣服脱下。我们需要穿毛衣。在春天，有很多节日；妇女节，四月愚人节，清明节…
春天是个美好的季节，是不是？
评价：
写得还可以，就是出现了一些语法错误，同时，该文章也有缺憾，比较简单

Answer 3

我最喜欢的季节是春天。因为春天是一个多姿多彩的季节。在春天，一切都得到了。草是绿色的。花朵开放。春天是温暖的。我们可以把我们的衣服，不能穿的衣服。我们需要穿毛衣。在春天，有很多天；妇女节，四月的愚人节，清明节…
春天是个美好的季节，不是吗？