Dad, please ride your bicycle to work
I want to say to my Dad. He is very fat. He usually go to work by his own car.Something withont faults will never be found. Although car is very convenient , it is very harmful to his health.Because of this, he becomes fatter and unhealthier. I think he should ride his bicycle to work. First, Our home is near his company. it`s no need to by car. Then, ride bicyle is good for his health. Although it is tired,it`s a way of lose his weight. Keep trying no matter how hand it seems, it will get easier. I think you can, Dad . I believr you.
单词或句型有错麻烦纠正一下,谢谢!