仿照九年级上册语文课本 雨说 写一篇诗歌

如题所述

第1个回答  2011-09-06
雪说:腊月已经在大地上等待久了……)
等待久了的大地和天空
等待久了的梅花和枝桠
当大地失去了丰收的喜悦气息
当天空残留下大雁南飞的身影
当梅花凌寒独自散发着幽香
当枝桠落下了最后一片枯黄的叶子
雪说,我来了,我来拜访腊月的大地

我来了,我的脚步悄然无息
我的身影在世界的每个角落停留
我把沉闷的空气冻结
我来了,带着飘飘洒洒的雪花

雪说,我来了,我的地方很寒冷
那儿白茫茫一片
我曾在风中飞舞着,嬉戏着
可是,我是孤独的
我是在这儿找回我昔日丢失的欢乐本回答被提问者和网友采纳
第2个回答  2011-09-06
我们也要写。泪奔~~~~
第3个回答  2011-09-01
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第4个回答  2011-08-28
真是疯了
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