这篇英语短文，改错，简单的！！！！！英语好的看下！！

Question

1 这是一篇英语课前演讲介绍元宵节的文章。大意就是 大家好，今天是我做演讲，希望大家可以认真倾听。 元宵节是春节过后的一个重要节日，在这个节日里，人们吃元宵。一家人在房子里做元宵，元宵象征着团圆。人们上街看花灯，大街上有很多花灯，花灯很漂亮。人们很开心，因为他们可以聚在一起。
2 hello everyone ,today is my speech .I hope everyone can listern. The lantern Festern is an important festval after the spring Festival . In the festival. people to eat Sweet dumpling . One family in the house together make Sweet dumpling. Sweet dumpling. represent family reunions. people will go to the Street to see lanterns. Street has many lanterns. lantern is very beautiful. people are happy.Because they can get together.
3 这篇文章里很多时态啊，词汇啊，好像有点差错。帮忙修改一下。希望是手动修改，改好的有追分滴，只限今天晚上之前。。。 谢谢！！

Answer 1

hello everyone ,today is my speech.
改成hello everyone ,today I will give you a speech
I hope everyone can listern这句话太不礼貌了
改成I will appreciate you attention.
In the festival. people to eat Sweet dumpling
改成In the festival,people usually eat Sweet dumpling
One family in the house together make Sweet dumplings.
改成The whole family get together in the house to make sweet dumplings.
people will go to the Street to see lanterns
去掉will，把see改成watch

Answer 2

Hi, everyone. Today, it is my turn / to talk. Your attention will be really appreciated. (这个是偷的第一个回答的哈。)
The Lantern festival is the first important festival after the Chinese new year, in the Chinese calender. In this festival, people will eat sweet dumplings. (这个元宵的翻译我不确定). The whole family will stay together and make the sweet dumplings together, since the sweet dumplings are round, and that means reunion. In the festival, people will go to the street to see the festive lanterns. There are lots of pretty lanterns in the street. People are celebrating the reunion.

Answer 3

hello everyone, I’m very happy to give a speech today. I hope everyone can listen to me carefully. The Lantern Festival is an important festval after the spring Festival . In Lantern Festival . people usually eat sweet dumplings. Everyone come back home and make sweet dumplings together, because sweet dumplings represent family reunions. people will go to the street to see lanterns. There are many lanterns along the street. Lanterns are very beautiful. People are happy, because they can get together.

Answer 4

Hello everyone.Today is the day when it's my turn to give you a speech .I believe you will listen to me carefully .The Lantern Festival is an important festival after the spring Festival. During the Lantern Festival ,people tend to eat sweet dumpling .The member of the family together make sweet dumpling in the house . Sweet dumpling,which symbol the family reunions.Besides people will go to the street to see lanterns on the night.At the same time ,having many lanterns in the street ,which are very beautiful. People are so happy that they can get together and have fun with each other.