这样的作文能有多少分啊?

The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling. As is shown in the picture above, the characters in the middle of it are doing something thought-provoking... The symbolic meaning of this picture subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. Undoubtedly,The creator of this picture strives to send out an abundantly clear message that nothing can be compared with positive attitude when it comes to our future.Put it another way,positive attitude is of supreme importance to future life... On my personal level ,it is high time that we should regard attitude's work to life. On one hand...

感觉写得很花俏,但是太花俏了而没有实质内容,如果LZ稍微朴实一点,而适当花俏,就是把花俏的句子减少一半,补充进去有内容的句子,我觉的就是个高分作文。这个太像模版太空洞。 查看原帖>>
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第1个回答  2014-05-02
感觉写得很花俏,但是太花俏了而没有实质内容,如果LZ稍微朴实一点,而适当花俏,就是把花俏的句子减少一半,补充进去有内容的句子,我觉的就是个高分作文。这个太像模版太空洞。
第2个回答  2014-05-02
其实没必要可以背模板啊。。。我的作文就是自己写的模板~~ 查看原帖>>
第3个回答  2014-05-03
这不可能是丁的作文,因为里面有thought-provoking。。。。。。 查看原帖>>
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