这是我写的一篇英语短文,希望大家帮我改改错.

Question

It is a great honour to have you here today.To me,try to write in English is a big chanllenge.Thus,there will be a lot of mistakes in my articles.So I hope you can help me to correct my mistakes.I will glad to accept your suggests.You know your suggests are to my articles what teachers' comments are to students' homework.Your encouragement is the best support for me .Form now on , I will write my articles in here. I hope you can read and correct them.Please attention them in time.

Answer 1

1.挑战是challenge，你多写一个n
2.suggest是动词，名词是suggestion
3.这句: You know your suggests are to my articles what teachers' comments are to students' homework.
改成：Your suggestions on my articles are the just like the teachers'.
4.这句: Your encouragement is the best support for me .
改成：Your encouragement will give me great motive power.
5.from now on笔误吧
6.这句: I will write my articles in here.
改成：I will write my articles here.
7.这句: Please attention them in time.
改成：Please pay attention to them in time.
8.I will BE glad....

Answer 2

It is a great honour to have you here .As for me,trying to write in English is a big chanllenge.Thus, a lot of mistakes will be found in my articles.I hope that you can help me to correct my mistakes.I will be glad to accept your suggestions.Your suggestions to my articles are as what teachers' comments to students' homework.Your encouragement is the best support to me .From now on , I will write my articles here. I hope that you can read and correct them.Please pay attention to them in time.
楼主，其实你这些都是典型的中国英语--比较啰嗦。以后要尽量语言简洁化。

Answer 3

To me,try to write in English is a big chanllenge
主语可以是动词不定式或动词ing，这句这样就少了主语。

I will glad to accept your suggests.
will \be/ glad to

suggests改为suggestion

Form now on - From now on

I will write my articles in here.去掉in

Please attention them in time.
attention是名词，应该用pay attention to

Answer 4

It is a great honour to have you here today.For me,try to write in English is a big chanllenge.Thus,there will be a lot of mistakes in my articles.So I hope you can help me to correct them.I will be glad to accept your suggestions.You know your suggestions to my articles equals to teachers' comments to students' homework.Your encouragement is the best support for me .Form now on , I will write my articles down here. I hope you can read and correct them.Please pay attention to them in time.
改得不一定全对,但请仔细看一下.

Answer 5

1"try to write in English is a big chanllenge"中try应改为trying；
2”Thus,there will be a lot of mistakes in my articles.So I hope you can help me to correct my mistakes”中的Thus和So都有”因此”的意思，所以二者用词重复；
3”I will glad to ．．．”中glad前应加be;
4"...accept your suggests"中suggest是动词，不是名词，应改为suggestion较为合适，后面有几处类似；
5”I will write my articles in here”中here前不要加介词．

呵呵，举手之劳，不用谢！

Answer 6

It is a great honour to have you here today. FOR me,tryING to write in English is a big challenge. I THINK there will be a lot of mistakes in my article. I hope you can help me WITH correctING my mistakes. I will BE glad to accept your suggestIONs. TO ME your suggestIONs to my article IS LIKE A teacher'S comment to THEIR students. Your encouragement WILL BE best support for me .FROM now on, I will write my articles here. I hope you can read and correct them. Please CORRECT them in time.

需要改的地方都是大写字母。