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1.It is said that a large shopping center will be built in our community.to是多余的,还有你要表达大型购物中心,只要用large就可以了,不需要用比较级。最后,这句话最好用被动语态好些,因为用there作主语 感觉很中式的英语。
2.The shopping center can serve all the things to us,which not only to our neighbor,but also to others.can情态动词后面用动词原形,not only前面加个which才能连接前面的句子,不然就是另外一个独立橘子,而不是跟前面句子组成的复合句了。but also是跟not only 并列的 所以也要加个to上去。
3.Every thing have two sides,building a shopping center is also like that.every 后面只能跟单数,对于“凡事都有两面”的翻译,现在可以告诉你一个更地道的表达法“every coin has two sides”。还有,如果用build a shopping center 作主语的话 要用building动名词做主语,我加的like that是指。。。也一样的意思。
4.Some people don't agree building it while others do.objiect指“反对”意思的时候,是不及物动词,不能直接加宾语,所以用agree会好些.
5.In my opinion,it brings us more advantages than disadvantages.比较级应该用more...than...的句式表达,还有这里用advantage和disadvantage会比较能让读者明白你想表达的意思。
6.Although it may lead to traffic jam if there is a large shopping center built in our community,it will make the economy of our community increase fast.还是一样,尽量不要用there做主语,还有make sth do 用动词原形就好了,不需要用increasing。
7.With the increasing economy,our living standard is increasing,too.这里前面是一个分句,不是一个完整的句子,所以不用is,生活水平/质量直接用living standard就好了,最后also用在句子前面,像:our living standard is also increasing.如果要用后面的话,改成too就没问题了。
8.What's more,it is convenient for us to buy everything we need,such as meat,vegetables,the drinds,the clothes,etc.表达“还有/更多的是”的词组是:what's more。想表达比如说 可以用such as 然后用etc或and so on.
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