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Question

下面有一封写给签证官的信。有些措辞拿不太准，所以希望大家帮我翻译一下。有所比较。或者大家觉得有什么不合适的地方也请帮我指出来。谢谢！！
亲爱的签证官您好，很荣幸由您来审批我的申请材料。我叫**，通常大家叫我**。ray是我的男朋友。我在2004年暑假时为了学习英语通过网络认识了ray,我们聊的非常投机。从此以后便经常保持联系。2006年11月份ray回国，并来看望了我。我们一起出去旅游，并度过了一段十分愉快的时光。但很可惜，我们那时没有留下太多合影。从那时候起，我们就开始彼此相爱了。可遗憾的是，他的假期很快就结束了，他不得不回去，还有一大堆的工作等着他。他回去之后，我们几乎天天打好几个电话，上网聊天发邮件等等。但即便如此，我们仍旧非常思念对方。这让我们彼此都非常痛苦。我非常高兴ray邀请我去新西兰看他，让我可以在这样一个美丽的国家和我心爱的人再次度过一段美好的时光！
这个对我来说很重要.希望大家真的想帮我就不要用电脑或者翻译工具给我乱翻译.拜托!我不是英语白痴.谢谢热心的朋友们!God bless us!

Answer 1

Dear visa officer Hello, I am honored by your approval to the application. My name ** ** Often people ask me. Ray is my boyfriend. I am here to learn English in 2004 through the summer ray understand the network, we very silly speculation. Since then will maintain regular liaison. November 2006 ray home, and to call me. Join us for travel, and spent a very pleasant time. But unfortunately, we did not leave much time photo. Since then, we started to love each other by. He is said to be, he quickly ended the holidays, he had to go back, there is a lot of work waiting for him. After his return, we almost every day to lay a few telephone calls, mail and so on the Internet chat fat. Even so, we still miss each other very much. This has enabled us to share very painful. I am very glad that I was invited to New Zealand to see if he ray. Let me be in such a beautiful country and I love the people once again through a wonderful opportunity!
你还是找些认识的帮你看看吧，或者自己上网查些类似的资料，在这里他们只会把你的话复制到翻译工具里，然后再给你把意思粘贴出来，很机械的翻译，错误百出
Dear visa officer,
I feel appreciate that you are in charge of my application. My name is ** **, people always call me ****. Ray is my boyfriend. I met his though the net when I was learning English in 2004'summer vacation. We had lots in commom. From then on, we always keep in touch with each other. Ray came back to see me last November. we went to travel together and had a very good time. But unfortunately, we did not take many photos. Since then we started to love each other. As his holiday was quickly gone, he had to go back to his office, there were lots of work waiting for him to be solved. After his return, we make phone calls almost everyday, or mail and chat in the net. Even so, we still miss each other very much. This makes both of us very gloomy. But I am glad that I was invited to see him in Newland, it offers me a chance to stay together with my lover in such a beautiful country and enjoy myself so much.Thank you!
Dear visa officer ,
Thank you for your attention in your hurry..It is an honorable thing that you approve my application .my name is **,in daily life ,everyone call me **.ray is my boyfriend .In the summer of 2004 ,I studied English by web courses and through Internet I got to know ray ,and feel like old friends at first chatting. After that ,we kept connection with each other .In 11.2006 ray came back to see me ,also we went travelling together , what a enjoyable thing that was .It was a pity that we had no more group photo .From then on ,we fell in love with each other .But his holiday was to be an end ,there was a lot of work for him to deal with ,he had to go home.while he went home ,we exchanged feeling through e-mails and chatting online ,even we called several times daily .Although we did so ,we still miss each other that make us feel suffering .It is very pleasure for me that ray invite me to 新西兰。Please give me a chance that make me have a nice time with my love in this beautiful country .
Thank you very much agian.
从来没写过，难免有错误

Answer 2

Dear visa officer Hello, I am honored by your approval to the application. My name ** ** Often people ask me. Ray is my boyfriend. I am here to learn English in 2004 through the summer ray understand the network, we very silly speculation. Since then will maintain regular liaison. November 2006 ray home, and to call me. Join us for travel, and spent a very pleasant time. But unfortunately, we did not leave much time photo. Since then, we started to love each other by. He is said to be, he quickly ended the holidays, he had to go back, there is a lot of work waiting for him. After his return, we almost every day to lay a few telephone calls, mail and so on the Internet chat fat. Even so, we still miss each other very much. This has enabled us to share very painful. I am very glad that I was invited to New Zealand to see if he ray. Let me be in such a beautiful country and I love the people once again through a wonderful opportunity!

Answer 3

你还是找些认识的帮你看看吧，或者自己上网查些类似的资料，在这里他们只会把你的话复制到翻译工具里，然后再给你把意思粘贴出来，很机械的翻译，错误百出

Answer 4

Dear visa officer,
I feel appreciate that you are in charge of my application. My name is ** **, people always call me ****. Ray is my boyfriend. I met his though the net when I was learning English in 2004'summer vacation. We had lots in commom. From then on, we always keep in touch with each other. Ray came back to see me last November. we went to travel together and had a very good time. But unfortunately, we did not take many photos. Since then we started to love each other. As his holiday was quickly gone, he had to go back to his office, there were lots of work waiting for him to be solved. After his return, we make phone calls almost everyday, or mail and chat in the net. Even so, we still miss each other very much. This makes both of us very gloomy. But I am glad that I was invited to see him in Newland, it offers me a chance to stay together with my lover in such a beautiful country and enjoy myself so much.Thank you!

Answer 5

Dear visa officer ,
Thank you for your attention in your hurry..It is an honorable thing that you approve my application .my name is **,in daily life ,everyone call me **.ray is my boyfriend .In the summer of 2004 ,I studied English by web courses and through Internet I got to know ray ,and feel like old friends at first chatting. After that ,we kept connection with each other .In 11.2006 ray came back to see me ,also we went travelling together , what a enjoyable thing that was .It was a pity that we had no more group photo .From then on ,we fell in love with each other .But his holiday was to be an end ,there was a lot of work for him to deal with ,he had to go home.while he went home ,we exchanged feeling through e-mails and chatting online ,even we called several times daily .Although we did so ,we still miss each other that make us feel suffering .It is very pleasure for me that ray invite me to 新西兰。Please give me a chance that make me have a nice time with my love in this beautiful country .
Thank you very much agian.
从来没写过，难免有错误