请问两个英语句子有没有什么错误？

Question

1,To master the topic is more difficult compared with other types of discourses,such as,the narrative discourse,expository discourse and so on.

2,From above,we can see the difference between appreciation and judgment lies in that appreciation is the assesment of things or things or process,while judgment is the evaluation of human and human behavior.

Answer 1

1.第一句,很有歧义,个人认为插入句最好放在你要伴随的主语阿动词啊之类的最近的地方,这里是other types of discourses 和topic想比较不是 to master the topic这个动作根other types of discourses比较,我会改成compared with other types of discourses,such as,the narrative discourse,expository discourse and so on,the topic is more difficult to master.
2.我觉得difference 是正确的，这个只有一个区别，你多打了or things.我觉得语法上没有什么错误，可是意思上我觉得evaluate human不对,只能evaluate human behavior.所以我觉得把human and去掉比较好

Answer 2

1.such as后面的这个逗号去掉
2.difference----differences

Answer 3

第一句：1 是不是把 other 改成 the other？
2 有一种说法是such as 后面最好接3个及以上的例子，但是for instance和for example 又更适用于一个例子，所以你这2个的还有点尴尬。

第二句：似乎多了一个or things