急求英语作文:假设你有一个英国笔友Tom,给Tom发一封电子邮件,介绍你的家乡的变化,词数大于60.

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请根据下列文字提示写出作文:lie in;great changes;high buildings,used to;a beautiful park;river;many fishes.

Answer 1

第一篇Go to Beijing, not only to watch the games and go to look for a walk world famous buildings, ancient human crystallization of the wisdom of product Great Wall and the Forbidden City. Today, I was lucky enough to take you to appreciate the them.

We first came to badaling Great Wall, it has eight beacon tower, so named badaling. The first four beacon tower to save the energy, we sit up, see wooden-horses feet is lush trees. The first four beacon tower, we began to climb. I began to feel very easy, wait until last beacon tower, feel. Just can also appreciate the scenery of I, now already tired panting. But I for me to climb the Great Wall of proud, because I when a warrior.

We came to the imperial palace ? 第二篇我的家乡在永福县城，这里是中国著名的“福寿之乡”。
My hometown is in eternal blessing county, here is the famous Chinese "fushou town.

以前，我们县是各方面最落后的县，大多数的人生活水平很低，县城街道两旁的房子低矮破旧，马路也是狭窄又不平。
Previously, we county is various aspects most backward county, most people live at very low levels, the county on both side of the street house low shabby, the road is narrow and rough.

改革开放后，尤其是近几年，我们县城发生了翻天覆地的变化。
Since the reform and opening up, especially in recent years, our county has undergone earth-shaking changes.

你看那街道两旁郁郁葱葱的桂花树呀，一到开花季节，一阵阵清香扑鼻而来，让人心旷神怡；
You see that line the streets lush GuiHuaShu ah, one to flowering season, waves infested scent and come, let a person relaxed and happy,

洁净宽阔的马路，漂亮整齐的楼房，新建成的美丽的居民小区，改建后焕然一新的学校，还有让大人、小孩休闲玩耍的天凤广场，在碧如玉带的西江河环绕下，为这座小城古镇增添了一份亮丽。
Clean the broad street, nice neat buildings, newly built the beautiful dweller, rebuilt after new-look school, there let adult and children's day to relax and play, such as in phoenix square of the xijiang river GHT silk, for this town around town add a bright beautiful.

优美的自然环境，清新的空气，让永福的长寿老人越来越多。
The beautiful natural environment, the fresh air, let ever blessed longevity more and more.

每天清晨，在天凤广场上，你会看到精神抖擞的老人们有的在打太极拳，有的练舞练剑，还有的在做永福人自创的福寿操……
Every morning, in the days of chicken on the square, you will see jingshendousou the old people in doing taiji, some practicing dance in practicing sword, and eternal blessing person do a made-up ampullarium fuck...

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他们每个人的脸上都洋溢着喜悦。
They everybody's face lit up with joy.

是啊！
Yeah!

他们哪有时间去老呢。
They which have time to old?

现在你会知道我的家乡为什么有那么多的百岁老人了吧。
Now you will know my hometown why there are so many centenarians now.

这就是我的家 ...
This is my home.

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Answer 2

Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I'm writing to talk about the changes in my hometown recently.
My hometown, Wenzhou, lies in the east of Zhejiang Province. Great changes have taken place these years. It used to be a small village, but now there are many high buildings everywhere. There is a beautiful park near my home, and there is a river in the park. Many fishes swim in the river. My parents and I often go to the park to have a walk every day.
I love my hometown, and could you please tell me about yours?
Look forward to your reply.

Yours,
×××(你的名字)

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