写一篇作文,高分悬赏!

内容:一个厂商写给另一个厂商的感谢信 主要是关于原材料涨价的事情
关心 concern
相当的,非常的 considerably
由于,因为 due to
不景气的市场weak market
总的趋势 general trend
周期,期间 period
情况与建设 situation and suggestions
销售增加 sales up
向上的,上升的 upward

重点句型
I am writing this letter to thank you for......

......is certain to help increase our future cooperation

the cost of raw materials has moved up greatly.....

labor cost

to readjust prices

price list

welcome to order our products

思路:

审好题

仔细审查所给的内容提示(包括文字和图表等),明确要求写的内容,确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等,理顺思路,确定主旨。

看要点,写片段

对于易于表达的内容,一次成句;对于一时难于表达的内容,写出词组。此时,既注意不遗漏内容要点,也不要随意添加任何内容。

步骤:

定句型,连词成句

这个环节是成文的关键,一定要注意做到:

(1)选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上,鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时,可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。

(2)写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。

(3)表达限定的内容有困难时,就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话,用变通的方法,以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话,表达起来似乎很难,但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来:Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.

(4)尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”,不可写成:Shesleptvery late.应该写成:Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”,不可写成:Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反,表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是:Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或:He isnotworried about his English at all.

连词成句,添减相宜

单句写出后,根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。

即:文章的开头(Introduction)、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中,还要注意以下几点:

(1)句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题,也是个逻辑思维方面的问题,这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点,你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。

(2)为了使句子或段落语义连贯,表达合理准确,可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等,表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。

(3)仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套,给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要,与整个文章浑然一体。

尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。

检查,修改,定稿,誊写

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序,这时要对照题目要求,认真检查以下几点:

(1)内容有无遗漏或误词,最好一一对应检查。

(2)体裁格式对不对。

(3)句子是否有语法结构错误,特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯,是否达意。

(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰,词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文,即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍,力求完美。
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第1个回答  2011-06-18
Dear Mr.John Smith:
We regret to inform you of a price increase of our products due to a rise in the price of the raw materials .Howerer.in view of our longstanding business relation .the order you've already placed for our products before will not be affected by the price change.And we would very much appreciate it if you could accept the change of the price understandingly and are still interested in ordering our products in the future.
Enclosed is the current list covering the full line of our goods.
I apologize again for the inconvenience caused by the price incerase .Thanks again for you understanging and trust.I hope we'll hear from you soon.

your sincerly,
Ding zhiwen

才10分啊?在加点呗。。。本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答  2011-06-19
Dear Sir
I would like to say"Thank you" most at he moment. I can never pay you back for you kindness and your patience. I used to be lazy to learn English and too shy to speak English English in front of the class. You found my problem and helped me out. With your help I made great progress and became the top student in our class. It was you who gave me a hand when I was in difficulties.
Yours
Li Ping
第3个回答  2011-06-18
求助高手快写啊,我明天还准备下载了
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