第1个回答 2011-06-20
第一题，如果你要保留你的原答案的句式的话，应该改改，hardworking , responsible都是形容词，问句中的personality traits最好用名词形式，推荐用conscientiousness and responsibility。后面的personality traits可以去掉，直接回答I admire conscientiousness and responsibility。
第二题，with后面多数跟名词，我不知道你这是想表达什么意思，是说“凭借耐心和责任心我能把它做好”么？如果是，我建议你说 I can do it well based on my patience and responsibility.
第三题，如果你写出来的是原问题，那它想问的是你如何去评价你的老板，问的是你的评价的标准，如果是想让你评价你的老板它会说Please evaluate your boss.
第四题，my workmates and I held someone's concert in Great Hall of the People. I participated in most of preparation. And it is a great success.最好不要用big，显得汉语气息太重。
第五，如实回答啊，我也不知道你得了什么奖项。
第六，英文中地址是从小到大说的，你把南京放前面，后面接Jiangsu province。
呼，累死我了，求给分~~~~~~~~
第2个回答 2011-07-04
1.回答这个问题，比较好的是从一个描述真人真实的任务属性去讲，比如：I admire someone who is hardworking, responsible, reliable and really paying attention to details. 这样的话你可以用更多实际的简单但有效的词汇，而不是一味的用复杂高端词汇，却不能在面试的交谈中叫面试官觉得舒服，觉得真实发自临场的反应（有点早先预备，背答案之嫌）
2.I am confident that I can achieve that goal with my patience and sense of responsibility.(不要说do it well,这样不对，很别扭）
3.一般被雇佣的人不要直接用BOSS 称呼自己的老板或上级: All my previous supervisors (或superiors) are excellent (这里说老板好，是哪方面的好，一般时说到他在工作上的好，或者人很好，nice， 或者很专业professional.), especially my hotel manager, who is very knowledgeable and kind, and has taught me a lot of things. (此处你拼写错误）。 I am so pleased to work for the company. (honor 不是用在这样的场合，而是用在荣誉方面，而且起码也要被动式honored。）
4. My colleagues and I organised a concert for xxxx(某人的名字，如果是个名人，这样就表示是一个他的音乐会，或影评会）in the People's hall. I was much involved in the preparation, and it was a hit (或者就简单的说it was very successful)
5.你就列举自己的荣誉和奖励 I was xxxxxx, I have been give a xxxxx prize for my outstanding performance in xxxxxxx.
6.I was born in Nanjing city, Jiangsu Province.
第三题应该是说评价具体的对象，不是问你对好老板的看法。
第3个回答 2011-06-20
1. Hardworking and responsibility are two traits that I admire most .
2. With后面接名词。这样写是可以的
3. Hotel Boss是什么意思？I am lucky to meet very good bosses in my company and we have good relationships. My Hotel boss is a wise man and he tought me a lot. I feel hornored working with him.
4. 这个实例是体现你的组织能力和团队协作能力。可以这么翻译：
My Colleage and I hold a very successful concert for a hot star in the Great Hall of the People . I participated in most of the preparing work and we had wonderful teamwork.
5. 这个照实回答。I have achieved **(奖励，比如Top Sales之类) in the company
6. I was born in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province.
一个小建议：你的回答有点简略了，如果是面试的话，最好要扩展出来，比如举例，比如说明为什么，从而向面试官更好地展现你的人品和能力。如果是网申，那还OK啦。
祝你面试成功！
第4个回答 2011-06-20
1.what personality traits do you admire?
A: I admire diligence and the sense of responsibility.
2.With patience and responsibility, I can do it well.(with 后面要加名词或动名词)
3.答案不错，我写个我的版本~ All of my bosses are warm-hearted and helpful to me, especially the hotel boss I worked with before. He is a talented and knowlegeble man who has taught me plenty of things by behavior as well as words. I feel greatly honored to have worked with him.
(问一下，看到问题上面说的是 How do you evaluate your boss? 你确定这个是问以前的boss 的吗 ？还是问现在你如何来评价老板呢 ，就是说，其实是问你什么样的老板才是比较好的)
4.My colleagues and I have organized a concert in the Great Hall of People which is a private one of XXX. I took part in most of the preparations beforehand. And the concert itself was a big success.
5.因为不了解你获过什么奖，就没法帮你翻译咯，呵呵。
6.不对，可以这样翻译~ I was born in the city of Nanjing, Jiangsu Province.
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