第1个回答 2011-01-06
My favourite music is pop music as it sooth me.
前句正确。
it is relax my heart,太华文式!it is 通常指这是(名词),而非形容词。
it relaxes my heart 此句没错,但要好像不适合这种表达。
第2个回答 2011-01-06
你可以这么说
My favourite music is pop music, it can let me feel relax.
因为你自己的后半句,有点中国式英语。
第3个回答 2011-01-06
你那样说有语法错误,可以改成:
My favourite music is pop music. It makes me feel relaxed
第4个回答 2011-01-06
应该是My favourite music is pop music,because it can relax my mind.
两个简单句之间需要有连词,比如because,and,but等等,视句子意思而定;is是系动词,后面不能直接跟动词原形,换成can就可以了;另外,mind表示心情,而heart多表示心脏
第5个回答 2011-01-06
it is relax my heart 错误
应该改为:
pop music makes me relax。