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学习评价：
通过：英语CET-6
计算机全国二级（C语言）
普通话二级甲等
获奖：
08学年度，获得国家励志奖学金
08年东华大学高等数学竞赛二等奖
07—08年，参加学校智力助残活动，获得08年上海市残联优秀志愿者奖
09年校学习优秀奖学金
学过SOLIDWORKS、proe 、msc等cad、cae分析软件，熟悉Office办公自动化软件
对公司理财、成本核算有一定了解
实践经历：
2009/7 -- 2009/8： 丰田汽车4s店见习 | 在汽车修理厂学习并参与轿车修理，对汽车构造原理有了实践性了解
2009/7 -- 2009/7： 中船重工江南造船厂暑期实践 | 参观江南造船厂旧址和长兴岛造船基地
2011/1 -- 2011/3： 发动机前端齿轮有限元分析 | 作为负责人完成测绘、建模和分析
领导经历：
2009/9 -- 20011/7： 发起创办东华大学魔方社，组织了校内外魔方交流活动
2009/10 -- 20011/7：北京领航教育集团东华大学校园代表，进行招生调研，组织策划了多次校园讲座培训活动
兴趣爱好 ：
热爱足球，长跑，游泳等体育运动，多次参加马拉松比赛，在校运会800米、1500米项目中多次获奖。喜欢旅游，从小在很多地方生活、上学，适应力强，见识广，人文地理知识丰富
2009/7 -- 2009/7： 中船重工江南造船厂暑期实践 | 参观江南造船厂旧址和长兴岛造船基地
2011/1 -- 2011/3： 发动机前端齿轮有限元分析 | 作为负责人完成测绘、建模和分析 怎么翻译呢？谢谢各位，再精益求精一下

Answer 1

你好，因为我在外企的人事部做过很多招聘工作，也许可以提一点改进意见。要找外企工作，我建议你最好咨询人事部资深招聘人员，弄清她们的大致心理，她们想从简历中看到什么，会有很大帮助。
第一，简历的思路需要更清晰，以学习评价那一段为例，我给你整理成三部分：1。有证的，2。其他技能，3。获奖情况：
School Achievements:
—Certificates:
Language: English- CET-6; Mandarin-National Level II Grade A
Computer: National level II (C language)
—Other skills:
Computer: SOLIDWORKS, ProE, MSC, CAD, CAE, MS Office
Some knowledge in financial management, cost accounting practice
—Awards:
2008 school year, national motivational scholarships
2008 Donghua University mathematics competition second prize
2007-08, participate in intelligent assistive activities in schools, Outstanding Volunteer Award obtained by CDPF of Shanghai
2009 school scholarships for excellent study

第二：注意一些措辞。比如：“领导经历”，这样的用语在很多人事看来是非常忌讳的。你要体现你的领导组织才能，但是不要让人觉得你已经把自己放到了领导的位置。建议改为“社会实践”。面试中回答问题时也要具体，不要说自己的目标是“成为领导”，或者说“我有领导才能”，你可以通过具体的成功事例来让人感觉到你的才能。又比如：“见识广”，不要直接说这种话，会让人觉得你太牛X，可能会引起不必要的反感。

第三：语言精简，避免空话。

Answer 2

Learning evaluation:

Through the CET 6: English

Computer national secondary (C)

Putonghua level 2 norway-level

Awards:

08 academic degrees, obtain the country pursues a scholarship

08 donghua university higher mathematics competition second prize

07-08, attend school intelligence ZhuCan activity, get 2008 Shanghai disabled persons' federation outstanding volunteers award

09 school learning scholarships for many times

Learned, SOLIDWORKS proe, MSC etc cad, cae analysis software, familiar with Office automation software

In corporate finance, cost accounting is a plus

Practice experience:

2009/7-2009/8: Toyota 4s inn apprentice | in automobile repair shop learning and participate in the car repair, the principle of automobile structure has practical understanding

2009/7-2009/7: the Chinese dhi jiangnan shipyard summer practice | visit jiangnan shipyard site and changxing island shipbuilding base

2011/1-2011/3: engine front-end gear | as the one in charge complete finite element analysis of surveying and mapping, modeling and analysis

Leadership experience:

2009/9-7:20011 / founded donghua university initiated organized clubs, rubik's cube stratified rubik's cube exchange activities

2009-10/20011/7: Beijing pilot education group donghua university campus representative, recruited investigation, organize many campus lectures training activities

Hobbies:

Love football, long-distance running, swimming sports and participated in the marathon, in pku 800 meters, 1500 meters project has won numerous awards. Like to travel, grew up in many places life, school, adaptable, experience is wide, humane geographical knowledge problem supplement:
Cost accounting for corporate finance, a better understanding of how to translate? "Love football, long-distance running, swimming sports and participated in the marathon, in pku 800 meters, 1500 meters project has won numerous awards. Like to travel, grew up in many places life, school, adaptable, experience is wide, humane geographical knowledge" this a few words of how to translate, thank you!!

Answer 3

Learning evaluation:
Through the CET 6: English
Computer national secondary (C)
Putonghua level 2 norway-level
Awards:
08 academic degrees, obtain the country pursues a scholarship
08 donghua university higher mathematics competition second prize
07-08, attend school intelligence ZhuCan activity, get 2008 Shanghai disabled persons' federation outstanding volunteers award
09 school learning scholarships for many times
Learned, SOLIDWORKS proe, MSC etc cad, cae analysis software, familiar with Office automation software
In corporate finance, cost accounting is a plus
Practice experience:
2009/7-2009/8: Toyota 4s inn apprentice | in automobile repair shop learning and participate in the car repair, the principle of automobile structure has practical understanding
2009/7-2009/7: the Chinese dhi jiangnan shipyard ? | visit summer practice
答案补充
对公司理财、成本核算有一定了解
In corporate finance, cost accounting is a plus

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Answer 4

Learning Assessment:
By: English CET-6
National Secondary Computer (C language)
Mandarin Upper Second Class
Awards:
08 school year, access to national motivational scholarships
08 Donghua University Mathematics Competition Award
07-08 years, participating in school activities, mental disabled, access to the Shanghai Disabled Persons Federation 2008 Outstanding Volunteer Award
2009 Outstanding scholarship school study
Learned SOLIDWORKS, proe, msc and other cad, cae analysis software, familiar with Office office automation software
On corporate finance, cost accounting and have some understanding of
Practical experience:
2009 / 7 - 2009 / 8: students work for Toyota 4s | in the auto repair shop to learn and participate in car repair, to have a practical understanding of the principle of automobile structure
2009 / 7 - 2009 / 7: Summer in the Practice of the Jiangnan Shipyard, China Shipbuilding Heavy Industry | Visit the Jiangnan Shipyard, and the Changxing Shipbuilding Base site
2011 / 1 - 2011 / 3: Finite Element Analysis of engine front gear | As a responsible person to complete mapping, modeling and analysis
Leadership experience:
2009 / 9--20011 / 7: Rubik's Cube Club launched Donghua University was founded, the organization of the internal and external communication activities Cube
2009/10 --20,011 / 7: Beijing Donghua University campus navigation Education Group representative for enrollment research, organizing and planning a number of training seminars on campus
Interests:
Love soccer, distance running, swimming and other sports, has participated in the marathon, the sports meeting 800 meters, 1500 meters in the award-winning projectLike to travel, childhood living in many places, school, adaptable, broad experience, extensive knowledge of human geography