一篇英语作文，帮我挑一下错，好的多加分！！！！！！！！！！！！求求各位了！在线等！！！！！！！！

Question

In today’s world, different people have different thoughts and ways. And some people like to do only what already do well. Other prefer to try new things and take risks. And I’d better agree the latter one. And I can state my reason as follows:
To begin with we can obtain experience at risks. For example you have never tried to do something before, but when you try your best to do this things, and you will gain experience from this things. Whatever the result is, it is very valuable experience. For example on December 11,2010, I attended SSAT exam and I didn’t have any confident, because I couldn’t remember enough words. And although the score is not higher. But what I need is experience but not high score.
In addition, when you succeed in challenging you will get great pleasure very happy. And lots of scienist and writer’s famous by their challenging. Which not only gives they economic returns, and also people give them high praise .
Moreover, challenging can change your personailty and force you to growth. You can imagine that you don’t have any challenging and when you grow you will feel very tired.
So I prefer to try new things and take risks.

Answer 1

In today’s world, different people have different thoughts and ways. Some people like to do only what is ready for them others prefer to try new things and take risks. For me，I agree with the latter one. And my reasons are as follows:
To begin with， we can obtain experience by taking risks. For example you have never tried to do something before, but when you try your best to do this it, you will gain experience，whatever the result is. Take myself for example， on December 11,2010, I attended SSAT exam but I didn’t have any confident, because I couldn’t remember enough words. Although my score is not very high I got what I need，which is experience rather than a high score.
In addition, when you succeed in challenging you will get great pleasure and become very happy. Lots of scienist and writer’s are famous for their spirit to challenge，which not only gives they economic returns, but also wins them respect from other people.
Moreover, challenging risks can change your personailty and enable you to grow up. You can imagine if you have never faced any challengs，when you grow up you will feel very tired.
So I prefer to try new things and take risks.
已改！
原文英文不太合语法，意思是这样的。

当今社会，人们想法各异方式不同。一些人情愿坐享其成，另一些人喜欢尝新冒险。我更欣赏后者，并将缘由作如下解释：
首先，冒险让我们收获经验。比如做一件以前从没做过的事，在付出做大努力尝试后你便从中获得了经验。不论成功与否，这经验非常值得。那我自己来说，2010年12月11日参加了美国中学入学考试，由于我单词记得不够多，当时一点信心都没有。虽然我的得分不高，但是这次我需要的是积累经验，并不是得高分。
此外，一旦你挑战成功，你就会非常幸福快乐。许多科学家和作家都是通过挑战自我不但得到了经济上的回报，也获得世人的赞扬。
更重要的是，敢于挑战会塑造你的人格促进你的成长。试想一下，如果你不曾面对任何挑战，那长大后你一定会活的辛苦。
因此，我更乐于尝新，敢于冒险。

Answer 2

In today’s world, different people have different thoughts and ways. And some people like to do only what already has been done well. Others prefer trying new things and taking risks. And I’d like to agree with the latter one. And I can state my reason as follows:
To begin with we can obtain experience at risks. For example you have never tried doing something before, but when you try your best to do these things, then you will gain experience from these things. Whatever the result is, it is very valuable experience. For example, on December 11,2010, I attended SSAT exam, but, I didn’t have any confidence, because I couldn’t remember enough words. And the score is not higher,but what I need is experience but not high score.
In addition, when you succeed in challenging, your will be very happy. And lots of scienists and writers become famous through their challengings, what not only give them economic returns, but also give them great honor .
Moreover, challengings can change your personailty and force you to grow. You can imagine that you don’t have any challengings and when you growing up, then you will feel very tired.
So I prefer to try new things and take risks.本回答被网友采纳

Answer 3

差点给你翻译了。。。
In today's world, people have different thoughts.Some like to do what has already done well, while others prefer to try something new.As for me, I'd better agree the latter one for some reasons.
Firstly, we can gain experience through chanlleges.For example, I attended SSAT exam on December 11,2010, and I didn't have any confidence because of my lack of words. It didn't end up well, but after my best trying to figure out those problems, I gained experience which was much better than high score.
Secondly,success in challenging will get you great pleasure.Losts of scintists and writers succeeded when trying something different.Apart from there economic returns, they received high praises.
Lastly,challenges are helpful to your personality as well as your growth.Without trying new things you will find yourself helpless.
Above all, I prefer to try new things better than to stick to the status quo.
发现大家都回答了好多哈，不过作为参考吧，我根据我的理解在内容和格式上稍微做了一些修改，如果你觉得可以的话可以选用一些^^加油

添加一些注释也许可以帮助你更好的理解。
1.第一句很重要，应该较简洁或者有亮点，different重复使用显得冗余。
2.and在一句话中连接上下分句并列关系时用得较多，不用在句与句间过多使用。
3.应该是already done 有语法错误
4.firstly,secondly,lastly结构较清晰且有主次关系，可以参考
5.简单句比较多，二句之间可以考虑用连接词或者从句
6.个人觉得第一个for example 好像不算是严格意义上的举例，所以放在真正的例子后面做分析是不是比较好？
7.famous by、at risks、force to等短语的使用似乎不是很和适宜
8.倒数第二句用and似乎不是很合适
以上仅属个人感觉，仅供参考，有些不正确的或者不清楚的可以再讨论下，希望能给你些帮助。

Answer 4

In today’s world, different people have different thoughts and ways. some people like to do the thing what have already been done well. Others prefer to trying new things and take risks.
For me, I’d better agree the latter one. my reasons are as follows:
To begin with, we can obtain experience from the risks. Suppose you have never tried to do something before, when you try your best to do this thing, you will gain experience which will make great difference in our rest life. For example, on December 11,2010, I attended SSAT exam without any confidence, because I couldn’t memorize enough words. Although the score is not high. But what I need is experience but not high score.
In addition, when you succeed in challenging yourself ,it will get great pleasure . lots of scienist and writer’s greatness is made by their challenging,Which not only gives them economic return, but also give them high praise from the public.
Moreover, challenging can change your personailty and force you to grow. You can imagine that you don’t have any challenging and when you grow you will feel very tired.
That's why I prefer to try new things and take risks.
大概就是这样了。因为时间比较急。总的感觉还不错，但我发现你的语法和词汇欠缺挺大的。但是记忆力很好。

Answer 5

In today’s world, different people have different thoughts and ways. And some people only like to do what have already done well. Others prefer to try new things and take risks, So do I.That's because I think we can obtain experience while risking. For example you have never tried to do anything before, but when you try your best to do these things, you will gain experiences . Whatever the result is, it is a very valuable experience. For example on December 11,2010, I attended SSAT exam though I didn’t have any confidence. Because I couldn’t remember enough words, and sure the score is not high. But what I need more is the experience but not only the high score.
In addition, when you succeed in challenging ,you will get great pleasure . lots of scientists and writers are famous for their encouragement of making challenges that not only give theym economic returns, but also the high praise given .What's more, challenging can change your personailty and force you to grow up. You can imagine if you don’t have any challenges , you will feel very tired when you grow up .
So I prefer to try new things and take risks.
输入内容已经达到长度限制
还能输入 9999 字插入图片删除图片插入地图删除地图插入视频视频地图