Hi！My name is .... After a little self introduction, let me talk about my idea. I think there is a very important thing about this job——we should let foreign students to know about Chinese culture. I think we can teach a little Chinese to them, because language is the soul in a country. Not only this，An assistant should have excellent organizing ['ɔ:ɡənaiz] ability [ə'biliti] and highly responsibility. If I can get this job, I’ll seriously organize the activities in class and positive completion the task.
I believe they’ll have a good impression about China.
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追答Hi！My name is Zhang Xueqian. After a short self-introduction, let me talk about my idea（用opinion更好一些）. An assistant should have excellent organizing ['ɔ:ɡənaiz] ability [ə'biliti] and higher （加上sense of）responsibility. If I can get this job, I’ll （用I would）carefully organize the activities during the class time and complete my task （用tasks）.
Not only about this. I think there is a very important thing to this job——we should let foreign students to know about Chinese culture. I think we can teach a little (用some 好一些) Chinese to them, because language is the soul in one country.
I believe they’ll have good memory （仍然用impressions 好一些）of China.